Please help this song come alive
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I wish to share the words to a song I would love to hear produced via the members of Indie Gospel Artists. The lyrics are derived of a book called When Calgon Wont Take You Away I wrote the book as a tribute to my youngest son about 10 years after his passing at the age of 5 to brain cancer. That was 1984 but Calgon wasnt published until 2005. Recently this song was created as well, as a spin-off I suppose, I dont know why but if it edifies God and is enjoyed for what it is then maybe there are other members that would like to bring it to life. I perceive it to be sung by a lady (black text) with a soft male voice whispering the hushed words as seen in blue fonts. A duet of sorts in green words? Or more! By all means, let it be known if you have suggestions. Thanks so much!
The Calgon Song
By Marsha Hoover
(legend for vocals)
All sing Solo Whispers
When Calgon wont take me away, I pray.
Dont cry now.
I know Ill look back and Ill say
Dont give up.
By the grace of God, I made it.
God loves you.
When Calgon wont take you away PRAY.
A delicious escape
To a warm bubble bath
Finds me soaking in faith,
Healing my heart full of wrath.
God loves us all.
When Calgon wont take you away, then pray.
Dont cry now
Youll look back on today and youll say,
Dont give up.
By the grace of God, you made it.
God loves you.
Please, God! God, please!
The pain, I swear,
The loss, this cross,
Is too much to bear!
God loves us all
Healing my heart full of wrath,
Finds me soaking in faith,
In a warm bubble bath.
A welcome escape.
When Calgon wont take you away
Dont cry now
From what surely precedes
Dont give up
Insanity,
Just say a little prayer and youll know
God loves you.
When Calgon wont take you away PRAY.
Well look back on today and well say,
By the grace of God, we made it!
When Calgon wont take you away PRAY.
updated by @marsha-hoover: 04/04/15 01:27:29AM